Telechat Review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-12
review-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-10-09-00

Request Review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-10-13
Requested 2015-10-01
Authors Tero Kivinen, Paul Wouters, Hannes Tschofenig
Draft last updated 2015-10-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-10-09
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-10-09

Review
review-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-10-09

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Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150911
IETF LC End Date: 20150923
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 6 page 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3: IMHO the choice of the SubjectPublicKeyInfo format is
  the right one.

 - 3 page 4: is a a very -> is a very

 - A.1 page 8 and A.2 page 10: i.e. -> i.e.,

 - A pages 7 - 10: BTW I used your 2 examples to add new unit tests in
  an application crypto library so I can confirm the 2 SPKIs are correct.

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr