Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-04
Requested 2014-01-23
Authors Hitoshi Asaeda, Qin Wu, Rachel Huang
Draft last updated 2014-02-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-04
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-02-04

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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-02-04




IETF LC End Date:  2014-02-04




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some minor comments.




 




Major issues:




N/A




Minor issues:




N/A




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 4], Section 1.4,




"used by network manager"---->"used by the network manager"




 




 




-[Page 8], Section 4.2, 




"In this document, the value I=00 is the reserved value and MUST NOT be used."




It would be good to add if it should be ignored by receiver if used, or discard the whole Synchronization Offset Report ...




 




-General: would be good to add caption to Figures p.5 and p.7




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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Meral Shirazipour




Ericsson Research




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