Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

Request Review of draft-ietf-xmpp-dna
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-07-08
Requested 2015-06-25
Authors Peter Saint-Andre, Matthew Miller, Philipp Hancke
Draft last updated 2015-07-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Fred Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-xmpp-dna-10-genart-lc-romascanu-2015-07-06
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-07-06


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Document: draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 7/6/15

IETF LC End Date: 7/8/15

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Very well written document – as all XMPP documents. Requires a lot of extra reading for the non-expert, including three non-IETF documents but these are freely available and all comes together nicely.

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