Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
review-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01-genart-lc-black-2015-04-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-04-20
Requested 2015-04-06
Authors Mohamed Boucadair, Alexandre Petrescu, Fred Baker
Draft last updated 2015-04-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by David Black (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -02 by David Black (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Al Morton (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Black
State Completed
Review review-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01-genart-lc-black-2015-04-21
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-04-21

Review
review-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01-genart-lc-black-2015-04-21

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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
Reviewer: David Black
Review Date: April 20, 2015
IETF LC End Date: April 20, 2015

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
	should be fixed before publication.

This is a short crisp draft on behavior of CIDR prefixes in IPv6 forwarding
with respect to the /64 boundary in IPv6 addresses.  It's clear, well explained
easy to understand, plus refreshingly short.  Nicely done!

Major issues: (none)

Minor issues: (none)

Nits/editorial comments: Ok, I found a nit ... and so did idnits ;-).

-- Abstract

   Hardware and software
   algorithms should therefore impose no rules on prefix length, but
   implement longest-match-first on prefixes of any valid length.

"algorithms" isn't the right word.
I suggest "implementations of routing and forwarding"

idnits pointed out that: A later version (-06) exists of
     draft-ietf-opsec-v6-05

Thanks,
--David
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