Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 19) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-10-11 | |
| Requested | 2016-09-22 | |
| Authors | Lars Eggert, Gorry Fairhurst, Greg Shepherd | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-10-11 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Paul Kyzivat
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Genart Telechat review of -18 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -17 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Tim Chown (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Paul Kyzivat |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 18 (document currently at 19) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2016-10-11 |
Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2016-10-07 IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-31 IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-13 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 Issues: (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but it has been removed.) (2) NIT: unlinked references I found a number of cases where, in the html format, references are not hyperlinked: [RFC4342] section 3 [RFC6679] section 3.1.7 [RFC1981] section 3.2 [RFC6935] section 3.4.1