Early Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 09)|
|Team||Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)|
|Requested by||Susan Hares|
|Authors||Mingui Zhang, Juniper Networks, Vengada Govindan|
|Draft last updated||2017-03-23|
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
This draft has not had a QA review, and it has passed WG LC. Please do a QA/WG LC review.
|Reviewed rev.||04 (document currently at 09)|
|Review result||Has Nits|
Hi, This is a short yet well written document. Looks really good. Just a couple of small questions/comments: 1. It's not clear exactly what from RFC 7175 is being updated by Section 4. This is based on the last paragraph of the Intro, yet Section 5 also seems relevant to that update. 2. In the IANA COnsiderations, it would be useful to explicitly list that the "RBridge Channel Protocols" registry is part of the "Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links (TRILL) Parameters" Thanks, Carlos Pignataro.