Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-session-hash-04
review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-session-hash
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-04-13
Requested 2015-03-30
Authors Karthikeyan Bhargavan, Antoine Delignat-Lavaud, Alfredo Pironti, Adam Langley, Marsh Ray
Draft last updated 2015-04-07
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2015-04-07

Review
review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07

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This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review.

Document: draft-ietf-tls-session-hash-04
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2015-04-01
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-13
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready


Major Concerns:

None


Minor Concerns:

The most recent RFC Editor style guide places normative and informative
references in top-level sections.  In this document, the normative
references should be Section 9, and the informative references should
be in a new Section 10.


Other Comments:

For absolute clarity, I suggest a small addition to Section 5.1.  It
says: "Thus, the entire encoding of the extension is 00 17 00 00."
I would add to the end of the sentence: "(in hexadecimal)".

Typo correction in Section 6.3: "sent by the server/".  Please replace
the slash with a period.