Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-27
Requested 2013-12-19
Authors Stephan Friedl, Andrei Popov, Adam Langley, Stephan Emile
Draft last updated 2013-12-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03-genart-lc-halpern-2013-12-20
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2013-12-20


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Document: draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03
    Transport Layer Security (TLS) Application Layer
             Protocol Negotiation Extension
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 20-December-2013
IETF LC End Date: 27-December-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:

    It appears that the ProtocolNameList is required to have at least 

two entries, based on "protocol_name_list<2..2^16-1>.  Why are at least 

two required, and how is the reconciled with the fact that when the the 

servers send a response using this construct it is required to include 

only 1 value?

Nits/editorial comments: