Telechat Review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03
review-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-04-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-05-08
Requested 2018-04-06
Draft last updated 2018-04-26
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -01 by Manav Bhatia (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Al Morton (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-04-26
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2018-04-26

Review
review-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-04-26

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-20
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     As noted in my email response to this document revision, the authors have responded to my earlier comments.  While I think there are significant regards in which the document should be clearer, and would be helped by such increased clarity, it is technically correct and publishable as is.

Nits/editorial comments:  N/A