Telechat Review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-08-29
Requested 2017-08-10
Draft last updated 2017-08-28
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Thomas Morin (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-08-28

Review
review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2017-08-28
IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31

Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03.  The new version is ready with one introduced nit.  Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat overlong.

Nit:
s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs brief explanation. 

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