Last Call Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-05
review-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-05-genart-lc-dupont-2015-05-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-13
Requested 2015-04-30
Authors Ram R, Tirumaleswar Reddy.K, Gonzalo Salgueiro
Draft last updated 2015-05-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Sam Hartman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-05-genart-lc-dupont-2015-05-13
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-05-13

Review
review-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-05-genart-lc-dupont-2015-05-13

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Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150515
IETF LC End Date: 20150513
IESG Telechat date: 20150514??

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 I reviewed the 06 version.

 - 1 page 3: signalling -> signaling

 - 4.1 page 5: after the terminology section it is recommended to avoid
  lower case keywords (e.g., the may in "A B2BUA may be in").

 - 4.4 page 11: a may and a should...

 - authors' addresses pages 13 and 14: India is the full country name,
  US the ISO IS 3166 code (the full name is USA). The current rule
  is to use 3166 two letter codes, I raised a concern as the UPU
  has the opposite rule (full names). Let the RFC Editor to handle this?

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr