Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stox-presence-06
review-ietf-stox-presence-06-genart-lc-halpern-2013-11-28-00

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Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-11
Requested 2013-11-27
Draft last updated 2013-11-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Ben Laurie (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-stox-presence-06-genart-lc-halpern-2013-11-28
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-11-28

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-stox-presence-06
    Interworking between the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) and the
      Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP): Presence
                      draft-ietf-stox-presence-06
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-November-2013
IETF LC End Date: 11-December-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publicationa s a proposed standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


   The reviewer believes that the minor points where he was confused 


are due to lack of recent contact with the SIMPLE work and no contact 


with the XMPP work.