Telechat Review of draft-ietf-stox-chat-10
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 11)|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Draft last updated||2015-02-21|
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Brian Carpenter
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Al Morton (diff)
|Reviewed rev.||10 (document currently at 11)|
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-stox-chat-10.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2015-02-21 IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-02 IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05 Summary: Ready -------- Comment: -------- This is a well-written document, even for one who knows nothing of XMPP or MSRP details. It strongly reminds me of the days when we had to build file transfer protocol gateways between FTP, FTAM and various proprietary protocols - the main problem was mapping non-congruent state machines into one another. The current draft has an amusing example: "idle" legitimately maps to "active". I expect that full deployment will reveal issues that haven't been noticed yet, so I also expect to see this document back for revisions in a few years.