Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-09
review-ietf-stir-passport-09-genart-lc-even-2016-12-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-passport
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-11-01
Requested 2016-10-20
Draft last updated 2016-12-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Roni Even (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-stir-passport-09-genart-lc-even-2016-12-05
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-12-05

Review
review-ietf-stir-passport-09-genart-lc-even-2016-12-05

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Document:  draft-ietf-stir-passport-09

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016-10-27

IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-1

IESG Telechat date:  2016-11-3

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

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Nits/editorial comments:

I noticed that the in the IANA section the security consideration for the
passport subtype reference RFC7515 yet the security section (10) of this
document does not mention RFC7515. Why is that?