Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18-genart-lc-dupont-2019-03-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-03-07
Requested 2019-02-21
Authors Ahmed Bashandy, Clarence Filsfils, Stefano Previdi, Bruno Decraene, Stephane Litkowski, Rob Shakir
Draft last updated 2019-03-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -18 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -18 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -18 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18-genart-lc-dupont-2019-03-07
Reviewed rev. 18 (document currently at 22)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-03-07

Review
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18-genart-lc-dupont-2019-03-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190228
IETF LC End Date: 20190307
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 3 and 7 page 20: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3: RFC8402 -> [RFC8402]

 - 2.1 page 5: ...,etc -> either ... or etc but not both

 - 2.2 page 5: i.e. -> i.e.,

 - 2.6 page 14: e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 9 page 24: Italy -> IT (for consistency)

 - A.2.1 page 28: if you have control on the text rendering: move FEC1: to
  the next page.

Spelling (other than Acknowledgements):
 - 2.10.1 page 17 and A.1 page 28: useable -> usable
 - A.1 page 28: penumtimate -> penultimate
 - A.2.1 page 29: ofthe -> of the
 
Please note all these editorial comments can be handled by the RFC Editor
so do not address them if you do not need to publish a new version of
the document.

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr