Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11
review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2017-01-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-12
Requested 2016-12-29
Authors Mohamed Boucadair, Jacni Qin, Tina Tsou, Xiaohong Deng
Draft last updated 2017-01-09
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -11 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2017-01-09
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 15)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2017-01-09

Review
review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-opsdir-lc-jiang-2017-01-09

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

“the specification of a DHCPv6 option that could be used to discover
   unicast PREFIX64s in environments where multicast is not enabled.
   Such side effect conflicts with the recommendation documented in
   Section 6 of [RFC7051].”

It is unclear how the Section 6 of RFC7051 relevant with the content above. It would be necessary to quote particular content of RFC7051 and give necessary analysis.

Nits:

“the Pv4 multicast address is inserted in the last 32 bits of the IPv4-embedded IPv6
   multicast address.”

Pv4//IPv4