Early Review of draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11
review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-intdir-early-weber-2016-12-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2016-12-29
Requested 2016-11-29
Authors Mohamed Boucadair, Jacni Qin, Tina Tsou, Xiaohong Deng
Draft last updated 2016-12-14
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -11 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ralf Weber
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-intdir-early-weber-2016-12-14
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-12-14

Review
review-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11-intdir-early-weber-2016-12-14

Moin!

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for <draft-foo.txt>.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these
comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF
contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments
that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.

I've read the document and see no issues with it. One minor nit that
might clarify things is in section 3 when explaining option length.
This is in octets while the other lengths in the option are bit mask.
Might be worth spelling out.

So long
-Ralf