Telechat Review of draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-11
review-ietf-siprec-architecture-11-genart-telechat-housley-2014-05-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-siprec-architecture
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-01-07
Requested 2013-12-05
Authors Andrew Hutton, Leon Portman, Rajnish Jain, Ken Rehor
Draft last updated 2014-05-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-siprec-architecture-11-genart-telechat-housley-2014-05-22
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-05-22

Review
review-ietf-siprec-architecture-11-genart-telechat-housley-2014-05-22

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-11
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2014-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-01
IESG Telechat date: 2014-01-09

Summary:  

Thank you for addressing the issues raised in my previous review.
This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major Concerns:  None.

Minor Concerns:  None.

Editorial Comments:

The changes to Section 3.2.4 to resolve my earlier comment have
introduced a clarity problem.  I suggest a minor rewording to fix it.

3.2.4.  Media Stream Mixing

   In a basic session involving only audio there are typically two
   audio/RTP streams between the two UAs involved transporting media in
   each direction.  When recording this media, the two streams may be
   mixed or not mixed at the SRC before being transmitted to the SRS.
   In the case when they are not mixed, two separate streams are sent
   to the SRS.  In the mixed case, a single mixed media stream is sent
   to the SRS.  However, in the case when the media streams are not
   mixed, the SDP offer sent to the SRS must describe two separate
   media streams.