Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-02
review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-02-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2020-04-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-04-07
Requested 2020-03-20
Authors Randy Bush, RĂ¼diger Volk, Jakob Heitz
Draft last updated 2020-04-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -01 by Yingzhen Qu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -01 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -02 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-02-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2020-04-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/E_WRy2XMPnCpkEw9RY5r7VwW5IM
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-04-01

Review
review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-02-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2020-04-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I think the document is ready and precise. 

Just one minor comment:
The document emphasizes the  importance of origin validation in eBGP egress policies, explaining specifics of correct implementation. 
I just wish it adds the examples described by Chris Morrow on the mailing list on the  use cases that explain why the mechanism described in the document is necessary because not everyone is as smart and knowledgeable as the authors. 

My two cents. 
Linda Dunbar