Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01
review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01-genart-lc-sparks-2020-03-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-03-18
Requested 2020-03-04
Authors Randy Bush, RĂ¼diger Volk, Jakob Heitz
Draft last updated 2020-03-13
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -01 by Yingzhen Qu (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -01 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -02 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Review review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01-genart-lc-sparks-2020-03-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/4P7LrWrmXsDs6ER9OcHa97IksRw
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-03-13

Review
review-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01-genart-lc-sparks-2020-03-13

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2020-03-13
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Very minor nit - feel free to ignore -

This sentence slowed me down when reading:

   As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, policy semantics
   based on RPKI Origin Validation state MUST be able to be applied
   separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.

I suggest something like:

  As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, a BGP speaker 
  MUST be able to apply policy semantics based on RPKI Origin Validation 
  state separately on distribution into BGP and on egress.