Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21
review-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21-secdir-lc-yu-2013-11-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidr-origin-ops
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-11-19
Requested 2013-09-19
Authors Randy Bush
Draft last updated 2013-11-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -21 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -22 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -21 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -22 by Al Morton (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Taylor Yu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21-secdir-lc-yu-2013-11-21
Reviewed rev. 21 (document currently at 23)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-11-21

Review
review-ietf-sidr-origin-ops-21-secdir-lc-yu-2013-11-21

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with nits.

The Security Considerations section appears to accurately document the
significant limitations of Route Origin Authorizations.

There should probably be an example of the sort of privilege
escalation attacks that can result from incautious Local-Preference
attributes.

Editorial:

In Section 4, "along with it's traffic engineering characteristic(s)",
change "it's" to "its".

Section 5 mentions a block 10.0.666.0/24, which is somewhat
distracting because that is not a valid IPv4 address block.