Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-13
review-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-13-opsdir-lc-vyncke-2017-01-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-11
Requested 2016-12-23
Authors Pushpasis Sarkar, Shraddha Hegde, Chris Bowers, Hannes Gredler, Stephane Litkowski
Draft last updated 2017-01-25
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Mike Shand (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Éric Vyncke
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Éric Vyncke 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-13-opsdir-lc-vyncke-2017-01-25
Reviewed rev. 13
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-01-25

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-rlfa-node-protection-13-opsdir-lc-vyncke-2017-01-25

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

 

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

 

Not being an expert in LFA, the review focus was only on operation.

 

And, due to the density and specialization of the I-D, I would like to ask the authors whether they read RFC 5706 about 'ops and mgmt guidelines', i.e., to check whether this I-D considered migration from an existing LFA to the new one, interoperations with previous LFA and how correct operations can be verified.

 

As the core topic is about loop-free alternates, we can assume that fault management and operations are at the core of this I-D. But, I encourage the authors to quickly review their document with RFC 5706 in mind.

 

There are also some nits and typos such as " uitilized" in the abstract.

 

I hope this high level review and kind request to the authors help

 

-éric