Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-31
Requested 2013-01-17
Authors Mike Shand, Stewart Bryant, Stefano Previdi, Clarence Filsfils, Pierre Francois, Olivier Bonaventure
Draft last updated 2013-01-31
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2013-01-31
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-01-31


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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib-09
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Feb-01-2013
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Feb-07-2013

This document is ready as an Informational.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 1

Nits: It is mentioned in Section 2 that, "The technology described in
this document has been subject to extensive simulation using real
network topologies and costs and pathological convergence behaviour."

If the simulations were published in an archival format conference
proceeding or if the results are publicly available elsewhere, it may
make sense to provide appropriate references.


- vijay
Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg at {,} / vijay.gurbani at