Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-06
review-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-06-secdir-lc-xia-2018-01-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-01-31
Requested 2018-01-17
Authors Lou Berger, Christian Hopps, Acee Lindem, Dean Bogdanović, Xufeng Liu
Draft last updated 2018-01-19
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by John Scudder (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Liang Xia (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Liang Xia
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-06-secdir-lc-xia-2018-01-19
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 12)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2018-01-19

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-06-secdir-lc-xia-2018-01-19

For the section of Security Considerations:
1. you may refer to templete in https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines to add some required general security considerations;

2. According to the above templete, [RFC5246], [RFC6241], [RFC6242], [RFC6536], and [RFC8040] must be "normative references";

3. I don't see the security consideration content about the readable data nodes. Is it missed, or there are not such readable date nodes need to be considered?