Telechat Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-11
review-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-11-genart-telechat-romascanu-2016-06-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-06-14
Requested 2016-05-27
Authors Petr Lapukhov, Ariff Premji, Jon Mitchell
Draft last updated 2016-06-13
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -10 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Dan Romascanu
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Yoav Nir
Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Lionel Morand (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Danny McPherson (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-11-genart-telechat-romascanu-2016-06-13
Reviewed rev. 11
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-06-13

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-11-genart-telechat-romascanu-2016-06-13






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Document:

 

draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc







Reviewer: Dan Romascanu







Review Date: 6/13







IETF LC End Date: 6/6







IESG Telechat date: 6/16







 







Summary:







The document is ready. It explains in a clear and detailed manner the operational experience in the design of large data centers using L3 only devices, Clos topology and BGP as routing protocol. I am not a routing
 expert, so I cannot validate all the statements made in the document, but the explanation seems clear and makes sense. The only comment I had in my IETF LC review was related to the lack of expansion of some of the acronyms (e.g. ASN, FIB ,etc.) – the issue
 was fixed in the revised version (11).







 







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