Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-25
Requested 2014-03-19
Authors Bernard Aboba, Jouni Malinen, Paul Congdon, Joseph Salowey, Mark Jones
Draft last updated 2014-07-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Paul Hoffman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11-genart-telechat-campbell-2014-07-17
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-07-17


[Apologies, I wrote this up earlier in the week then seem to have failed to send it.]

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Document: draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2014-03-25
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2014-03-17

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. All of my previous comments have been addressed in correspondence.

Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

-- While by no means a show stopper, I think it might be helpful to add a little of the explanation that the authors offered in email to address my original questions about sections 2.1 and 2.2.