Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09
review-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2014-05-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-05-27
Requested 2014-05-15
Authors Frederic JOUNAY, Yuji Kamite, Giles Heron, Matthew Bocci
Draft last updated 2014-05-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2014-05-24
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-05-24

Review
review-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2014-05-24

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Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-09.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-05-24
IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-27
IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-29

Summary: Ready
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Comment:
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The document states that it is scoped for MPLS substrates, but I see very little
in it that requires MPLS. Archtecturally, it is quite general. Was there any
reason to limit the scope to MPLS?

Nit
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Newly added typo:

7. Contributing Aurhors