Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-27
Requested 2014-03-13
Authors Frederic JOUNAY, Yuji Kamite, Giles Heron, Matthew Bocci
Draft last updated 2014-03-18
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2014-03-18
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-03-18


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Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-p2mp-pw-requirements-07.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-03-18
IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-27
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Summary: Ready

Minor issues:

The document is scoped for MPLS substrates, but I see very little in it that requires
MPLS. Archtecturally, it is quite general. Was there any consideration of making it
applicable to a non-MPLS substrate?

> 3.4.7.  Scalability
>   The solution SHOULD scale at least linearly with the number of Leaf
>   PEs.

I think this should be "at worst linearly".