Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-framework-22
review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-precis-framework |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 23) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-04-22 | |
| Requested | 2014-04-24 | |
| Authors | Peter Saint-Andre, Marc Blanchet | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-11-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Tom Taylor
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Genart Last Call review of -22 by Tom Taylor (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Charlie Kaufman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tom Taylor |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 22 (document currently at 23) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2014-11-28 |
Review
review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-precis-framework-22 Reviewer: Tom Taylor Review Date: 2015-02-14 IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19 IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19 Summary: Ready to go with one nit. Noted that idNits is not happy with the reference to RFC 20 because of the latter's unknown state. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 1, bullet a: s/included protocol/included in a protocol/