Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-framework-22
review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-precis-framework
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-04-22
Requested 2014-04-24
Draft last updated 2014-11-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -22 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor
State Completed
Review review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28
Reviewed rev. 22 (document currently at 23)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-11-28

Review
review-ietf-precis-framework-22-genart-lc-taylor-2014-11-28

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Document: draft-ietf-precis-framework-22
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 2015-02-14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19



Summary: Ready to go with one nit. Noted that idNits is not happy with 


the reference to RFC 20 because of the latter's unknown state.




Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1, bullet a: s/included protocol/included in a protocol/