Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-framework-15
review-ietf-precis-framework-15-genart-lc-taylor-2014-04-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-precis-framework
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-04-22
Requested 2014-04-10
Draft last updated 2014-04-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -22 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor
State Completed
Review review-ietf-precis-framework-15-genart-lc-taylor-2014-04-13
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 23)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-04-13

Review
review-ietf-precis-framework-15-genart-lc-taylor-2014-04-13

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This document is beautifully written and is ready to go. As a person 


unfamiliar with the basic concepts I had to read into the document a bit 


to get traction, then re-read from the beginning, but the additional 


effort was minimal and rewarding.




Document:           draft-ietf-precis-framework-15
Reviewer:           Tom Taylor
Review Date:        13/04/2014
IETF LC End Date:   23/04/2014
IESG Telechat date: 24/04/2014

Summary: This document provides:
-- the historical background leading up to the approach used for
   its technical content
-- definitions of two string classes suitable as bases for two
   general classes of application
-- instructions for creating profiles of the string classes
   (particularly the FreeformClass) for specific applications
-- a satisfying set of security considerations.



This document obsoletes Stringprep (RFC 3454). It establishes new IANA 


registries for derived properties of Unicode code points for Unicode 


versions subsequent to 6.2, for base string classes, and for profiles.




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