Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-07
review-ietf-precis-7564bis-07-genart-lc-holmberg-2017-06-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-precis-7564bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-06-13
Requested 2017-05-30
Draft last updated 2017-06-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Review review-ietf-precis-7564bis-07-genart-lc-holmberg-2017-06-22
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2017-06-22

Review
review-ietf-precis-7564bis-07-genart-lc-holmberg-2017-06-22

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Document:                       draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-07.txt

Reviewer:                         Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                   22 June 2017

IETF LC End Date:           13 June 2017

IETF Telechat Date:        6 July 2017



Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. However, I have one comment (see below) that I would like the authors to address.


Major Issues: None



Minor Issues:

Q1: Section 13.2 says that PRECIS only support Unicode. While Unicode is mentioned throughout that document, is that restriction mentioned elsewhere? I think it would be good to make it explicit already in the Introduction, or by indicating it in an Applicability/Scope section in the beginning of the document.



Editorial Issues: None