Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-12-22
Requested 2017-12-08
Authors Xufeng Liu, Pete McAllister, Anish Peter, Mahesh Sivakumar, Yisong Liu, fangwei hu
Draft last updated 2018-01-01
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -00 by Dean Bogdanović (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -12 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Melinda Shore
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pim-yang-12-secdir-lc-shore-2018-01-01
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-01-01


This document presents a YANG model for devices that implement protocol independent multicast (PIM).  The bulk of this document contains data model definitions for the base model and for PIM YANG models and is beyond the scope of this review.

The security considerations section appears to be derived directly from published YANG model RFCs and seems reasonable.  The nits checker picked up some outdated references and two downrefs (Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 3569 and Normative reference to an Experimental RFC: RFC 3973) as well as several outdated references, and those will need to be fixed prior to publication.

Overall, the document quality is good.