Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-15
Requested 2017-12-01
Authors Xufeng Liu, Pete McAllister, Anish Peter, Mahesh Sivakumar, Yisong Liu, fangwei hu
Draft last updated 2017-12-11
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -00 by Dean Bogdanović (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -12 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pim-yang-12-genart-lc-even-2017-12-11
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-12-11


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Document: draft-ietf-pim-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-12-11
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

I reviewed the document but am not a yang expert.

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