Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-03-12-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-03-20 | |
| Requested | 2019-03-06 | |
| Authors | Udayasree Palle, Dhruv Dhody, Yosuke Tanaka, Vishnu Beeram | |
| Draft last updated | 2019-03-12 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -10 by Andrew Malis
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Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Donald Eastlake (diff) Genart Last Call review of -12 by David Schinazi (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Tim Chown |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | David Schinazi |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-03-12 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 12 (document currently at 13) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2019-03-12 |
Review
review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-03-12
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12 Reviewer: David Schinazi Review Date: 2019-03-12 IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None