Telechat Review of draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20111014
IETF LC End Date: 20110926
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: I've seen some comments during the last call,
perhaps this is why the current version is 03 but I reviewed (and forgot
to send the review) the version 02.
- 3.3.1 page 14: I suggest m=* in place of m=??
- 4 page 15 (comment): in general encryption is done after
compression for crypto reasons and common sense: encryption gives a
perfectly random result, i.e., something impossible to compress...
- Authors' Addresses page 19: United States -> USA
Regards (and sorry for the delay, but my comments could (should!) be handled
by the RFC Editor)
Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr