Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-congcons-01
review-ietf-pals-congcons-01-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-01-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pals-congcons
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-01-05
Requested 2015-12-04
Authors Yaakov Stein, David Black, Bob Briscoe
Draft last updated 2016-01-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Keyur Patel (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Menachem Dodge
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pals-congcons-01-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-01-11
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-01-11

Review
review-ietf-pals-congcons-01-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-01-11

Hello, 

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This intended status of this document is Informational.

This document discusses Pseudowires (PW) under congestion conditions and whether the PW traffic can harm other traffic. The conclusions are that PWs transporting responsive traffic behave as desired and don't require additional mechanisms. For inelastic PWs such as TDM PWS it is proposed that the TDM PW be shut down when congestion conditions persist and it can no longer deliver accepatable traffic.

The Nits tool found the following warning:

Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of
     draft-ietf-tsvwg-circuit-breaker-04


Other than the above, I have no issues with the document.

Thank you kindly,

Menachem Dodge