Last Call Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09
review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-secdir-lc-housley-2016-10-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-10-25
Requested 2016-10-14
Authors Alexander Knauf, Thomas Schmidt, Gabriel Hege, Matthias Wählisch
Draft last updated 2016-10-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Secdir Early review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-secdir-lc-housley-2016-10-20
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-10-20

Review
review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-secdir-lc-housley-2016-10-20

I reviewed this document for the Security Directorate after a request
by the ART AD for an early review.

Version reviewed: draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09


Summary: Ready (from a Security Directorate perspective)

Thank you for addressing the comments that I provided on -08.


Major Concerns:  None


Minor Concerns:  None


Nits:

Section 5.1 says:

   When defining the pattern, care must be taken to avoid conflicts
   arising from two user names of witch one is a substring of the other.

s/witch/which/



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