Last Call Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-share
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-11-01
Requested 2016-10-12
Authors Alexander Knauf, Thomas Schmidt, Gabriel Hege, Matthias Wählisch
Draft last updated 2016-11-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Secdir Early review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Rick Casarez
State Completed
Review review-ietf-p2psip-share-09-opsdir-lc-casarez-2016-11-08
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-11-08



I have reviewed this document

 as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with Nits

Section 6.5:

"Since stored values could

 have been modified or invalidated prior to their expiration, an 

accessing peer SHOULD use a Stat request to check for updates prior

 to using the data cache"

When considering security, and how this works, I would recommend changing this to MUST or advising that the lifetime be set very low. A stale ACL could allow access were none should occur.


Cheers, Rick