Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-03
review-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-03-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2016-04-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-04-26
Requested 2016-04-10
Draft last updated 2016-04-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -03 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -00 by John Drake (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Bradner
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-03-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2016-04-23
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-04-23

Review
review-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-03-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2016-04-23

I did an OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator-04

This ID documents a way to transport S-BFD discriminators in OSPF.

This is a simple and clean document and presents no operations related issues that I could see.  Except for one nit this ID seems ready for publication

The one nit: the following looks like a typo:

2.2.  Flooding Scope
…
Note that the S-BFD session may be required to pan multiple areas,

s/pan/span/?

 
Scott