Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03
review-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-02-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-12-17 | |
| Requested | 2013-11-27 | |
| Authors | Alvaro Retana, Stan Ratliff | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-12-02 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Christer Holmberg
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Genart Telechat review of -04 by Christer Holmberg Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Stephen Kent (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-02 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
| Review result | Almost Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2013-12-02 |
Review
review-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-02
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 28 November 2013 IETF LC End Date: 17 December 2013 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, but with one minor issue that the authors may want to consider addressing. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: As an outsider, it is a little difficult for me to get a picture of exactly how the document updates RFC 5820. Would it be possible to add a few words to the last paragraph in the introduction. Something like: "This document updates [RFC5820] by describing the use of the MANET interface in single-hop broadcast networks, by blah blah blah, blah blah blah, and blah blah blah." Editorial nits: None