Telechat Review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-
review-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-genart-telechat-garcia-2012-08-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-08-17
Requested 2012-08-03
Authors Torsten Lodderstedt, Mark McGloin, Phil Hunt
Draft last updated 2012-08-31
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Miguel García
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Miguel García
Assignment Reviewer Miguel García
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-genart-telechat-garcia-2012-08-31
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-08-31

Review
review-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-genart-telechat-garcia-2012-08-31

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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-oauth-v2-threatmodel-06.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-08-30
IESG Telechat date: 2012-08-30

Summary: The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.



I reviewed version -06 of this document, indicating that the document was 


ready for publication. In the current version -07, new sections have been 


added. I have reviewed the new and modified text, and I only have an 


editorial comment (see below).




Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:


There is a typo in the title of Section 8.1. It says "Informative 


References", but I guess it should say "Normative References", because 


the "Information References" are listed in Section 8.2.




/Miguel


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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain