Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values-04
review-ietf-oauth-amr-values-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-amr-values
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-12-13
Requested 2016-11-29
Authors Michael Jones, Phil Hunt, Anthony Nadalin
Draft last updated 2017-01-17
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-amr-values-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-01-17
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-01-17

Review
review-ietf-oauth-amr-values-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-01-17

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

 

I think the document is written very clear, it doesn’t create any operational issues to network.

 

However, I am a bit surprised that the draft is “standard track”.

The draft describes the procedure to register to IANA, acronyms, and template. I am not sure if you need an RFC for this, let alone “Standard Track”. At most, the draft should be “informational”.

 

 

Linda Dunbar

 

 

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