Early Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01
review-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01-rtgdir-early-drake-2016-07-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-07-07
Requested 2016-06-14
Draft last updated 2016-07-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by John Drake (diff)
Secdir Early review of -08 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -08 by David Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer John Drake
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01-rtgdir-early-drake-2016-07-07
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 14)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2016-07-07

Review
review-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01-rtgdir-early-drake-2016-07-07






FYI




 







Yours Irrespectively,




 




John







 










From:

 John E Drake





Sent:

 Friday, June 17, 2016 9:50 AM




To:

 'matthew.bocci at nokia.com'; 'bensons at queuefull.net'; 'nvo3 at ietf.org'; 'draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve at tools.ietf.org'




Subject:

 Routing directorate QA review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01










 




Hi,




 




I reviewed the draft and I thought it was fine.  The only question I have is whether the authors considered adding the TLV-based capabilities to VXLAN GPE rather than having a similar but different
 encapsulation header?




 







Yours Irrespectively,




 




John







 










From:

 Zhangxian (Xian) [

mailto:zhang.xian at huawei.com

]





Sent:

 Monday, June 13, 2016 10:14 PM




To:

 John E Drake




Cc:

 

matthew.bocci at nokia.com

; Jonathan Hardwick; Jon Hudson




Subject:

 Routing directorate QA review of draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01










 




Hi, John,




How are you? I hope everything is fine. There were quite a few drafts that need review and we used all of our review experts
 within less than two months. And we are circulating back to you now. 




Please would you be the routing directorate QA reviewer for draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-01?




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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve/







Note that this is a “QA review.” The document does not yet have consensus to be forwarded to the
 IESG. The goal of this review is to provide a new perspective on the work in progress and to improve its quality. Hence, your comments will be provided primarily for the benefit of the NVO3 chairs and the document authors.





Please could you provide your comments by 28

th

 June? You should send your comments
 to the draft authors and WG chairs, and copy the relevant WG mailing list and the rtg-dir list.





The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and guidance for the QA reviewer.




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https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa







Please let me know whether you can do it, or not.





Many thanks


Xian