Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04
review-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04-opsdir-telechat-ersue-2013-11-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-11-19
Requested 2013-11-11
Authors Thomas Haynes
Draft last updated 2013-11-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -04 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mehmet Ersue
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04-opsdir-telechat-ersue-2013-11-20
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-11-20

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04-opsdir-telechat-ersue-2013-11-20



I reviewed the draft with the title "Requirements for Labeled NFS" (draft-ietf-nfsv4-labreqs-04) for its operational impact. 




 




Intended status: Informational




Current draft status: WG Document




 




Summary: This document describes high-level requirements for the integration of flexible MAC functionality into the NFS v4.2.  It describes the level of protections that should be provided over protocol components and the basic structure of the proposed
system.  




 




::: The document is focusing mainly on requirements and is aimed to publish as Informational. I don't see any implications from the operations and management pov.




 




There are nits which need to be fixed:




 




** The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.




http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist#anchor4


says:

 

“

If there is no action for IANA, the section should say that, e.g., including something like
"This document has no actions for IANA."




 




== Outdated reference: A later version (-20) exists of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-19




 




Mehmet