Telechat Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14
review-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14-genart-telechat-yee-2012-11-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-11-08
Requested 2012-10-25
Draft last updated 2012-11-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Peter Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -14 by Peter Yee (diff)
Tsvdir Early review of -?? by David Black
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Charlie Kaufman
Assignment Reviewer Peter Yee
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14-genart-telechat-yee-2012-11-29
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-11-29

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14-genart-telechat-yee-2012-11-29

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Nov-29-2012
IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012
IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that
should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.]

All other corrections from the -13 review were accepted and the other
changes in the current version appear reasonable.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 4.2.1.8, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: bracket "Section 2.8.1"  in
"(see" and ")" for readability.
[This is my same suggestion from the previous review.  I won't mention it
again, I promise. :-) ]