Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06
review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-06-28
Requested 2018-06-14
Authors Andy Bierman, Martin Björklund, Jürgen Schönwälder, Kent Watsen, Robert Wilton
Draft last updated 2018-06-28
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -04 by Reshad Rahman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Erik Kline (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2018-06-28

Review
review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Has Nits

I have been asked to review this document on behalf of the ops directorate.  

This document describes how to use/place YANG Library used by Network Management Server
The document goes on describing a "standard mechanism to expose which YANG Modules are used". 

Nits:
The document didn't say who will be the user.
 If anyone is interested to know "which YANG Modules are used", this person usually needs to know the details of the YANG Module, not just the Module names specification. 
He/she may need to  get the entire YANG Modules 

Is YANG Library same as YANG Library Definitions? some sections refer to "The Definitions". Does it mean same as YANG Library? 

Linda Dunbar