Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07
review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-24
Requested 2017-10-10
Authors Andy Bierman, Martin Björklund
Draft last updated 2017-10-24
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -04 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-10-24

Review
review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24

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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-10-24
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25
IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26

Summary: A well written document that is ready for publication

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

These are really minor but I notices them during the review.

Paragraphs 1 and 2 of Section 2.2 (simplicity have a lot of overlapping content. Perhaps they could be merged.

"This choice matches if all leafs present in the rule match the request." Maybe it is different  in C/S but the plural of leaf is usually leaves.