Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07
review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-10-24 | |
| Requested | 2017-10-10 | |
| Authors | Andy Bierman, Martin Björklund | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-10-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -04 by Radek Krejčí
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Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2017-10-24 |
Review
review-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-10-24
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-10-24 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 Summary: A well written document that is ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: These are really minor but I notices them during the review. Paragraphs 1 and 2 of Section 2.2 (simplicity have a lot of overlapping content. Perhaps they could be merged. "This choice matches if all leafs present in the rule match the request." Maybe it is different in C/S but the plural of leaf is usually leaves.