Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-25
Requested 2014-03-20
Authors Kireeti Kompella, Loa Andersson, Adrian Farrel
Draft last updated 2014-03-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Roni Even
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-06-genart-telechat-even-2014-03-22
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-03-22


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Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014–2-24

IETF LC End Date: 2014–3-3

IESG Telechat date: 


Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC




Major issues:


Minor issues:



In section 3.2 (a):  I noticed that 

the policy to update the registry according  to section 5 is standard action so it should be the same here since this is an update to the registry.



Nits/editorial comments:

In section 3 last sentence “This answer to this” should be “The ..”

In section 3.2 item c you have “for for”