Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05
review-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05-genart-lc-even-2014-02-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-03-03
Requested 2014-02-20
Authors Kireeti Kompella, Loa Andersson, Adrian Farrel
Draft last updated 2014-02-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Roni Even
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05-genart-lc-even-2014-02-24
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-02-24

Review
review-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05-genart-lc-even-2014-02-24

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document:  

draft-ietf-mpls-special-purpose-labels-05

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014–2-24

IETF LC End Date: 2014–3-3

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC

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Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

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In section 3.2 (a):  I noticed that 

the policy to update the registry according  to section 5 is standard action so it should be the same here since this is an update to the registry.

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 3 last sentence “This answer to this” should be “The ..”

In section 3.2 item c you have “for for”