Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-03
Requested 2015-08-20
Authors Nobo Akiya, George Swallow, Carlos Pignataro, Loa Andersson, Mach Chen
Draft last updated 2015-08-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Dan Frost (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-23
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-08-23

Review
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03-genart-lc-taylor-2015-08-23

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 2015-08-21
IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-03
IESG Telechat date: TBD



Summary: Ready with nits. A number of missing "the"s noted but left to 


the RFC Editor.




Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:



IDNits notes that draft-ietf-mpls-proxy-lsp-ping has now been published 


as RFC 7555.




Sec. 3, third line: s/carry ordered/carry an ordered/

Sec. 3.2, paragraph following bullet 9:
s/The responder LSR is to select/The responder LSR MUST (SHOULD?) select/
Begin next sentence with "The".